Have a look at my website!

Hey there,

My apologies if I am posting this tread in a wrong forum section. Just looking for people with good experience in building affiliate marketing sites. I launched my website a while ago and currently growing traffic on it. Would you mind to take a look at it? Is it readable enough? Maybe my texts are not compelling to catch people's attention. Here is the link

Appreciate your thoughts as well as criticism

Many thanks
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